Comics - Jax The Badger( normal and Stone crazed) - June 27th, 2010, 6:28 pm

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TyTH, June 27th, 2010, 6:28 pm ( Reply )

I think I jacked up the arm.
Otherwise useful c+c . oh and which should be jax? left or right?




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KK Awesomesauce, June 28th, 2010, 10:13 pm ( Reply )


Okay here goes some c&c...

Starting from top to bottom.
HEAD AREA:
Pretty good quill design.
Bad head shading.
You should change the eyes so the arent sonic eyes.
Shirt: Bad shading.
Jacket: Pretty good, but the sleeve is too small.
Arm: Too small, and you cant tell that the arm is going into a pocket. I would use arms and hands that have already been made.
Pants: A bit too baggy, and the right leg (our left) should be bigger.
Sorry but bad shading again.
Shoes: Be creative! Make your own design!

Your getting better, Ty.
Work on some of that stuff I said.
And I choose the one on the left.


TyTH, June 29th, 2010, 9:43 am ( Reply )


okay, kk I'll fix most of the stuff you said except for a: where he lives really baggy pants is a good thing and as a child he injured his leg. b: the arm i will fix because the sprite i used didn't have arms. c: i used a tut to shade the pants and shirt because somehow i forgot how to and i'll sorta fix it. And im a bit too lazy to make a different shoe.


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