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Blitzn'Burst, June 20th, 2010, 7:57 am ( Reply )

hmmm i c what you did ther......okay find i didnt ;-;

btw i love your custom style of looks more badassish and what not 8D

Pyro_Hedgehog, June 20th, 2010, 8:02 am ( Reply )

Who requested this?

metaboo, June 20th, 2010, 8:03 am ( Reply )


Thunder the HalfBloodHedgehog, June 20th, 2010, 10:47 am ( Reply )

That's strange, it looks a lot like me.

metaboo, June 20th, 2010, 11:19 am ( Reply )

creeepy... maybe you're related!

drew6464, June 20th, 2010, 12:07 pm ( Reply )

top legs are way too skinny, and T-Shirts aren't that short unless they're all tucked in and nerdy. Bad color choice and some of it looks like pillow shading (eww.) Do better next time.

XP_Lulz, June 20th, 2010, 12:12 pm ( Reply )



But the base is good.

metaboo, June 20th, 2010, 12:23 pm ( Reply )

@drew: obviously he is on a diet. the shirt goes up more, but you cant see it because of the scarf and his furry muzzle. As for shading, what is pillowed?

Zephyr (Guest), June 20th, 2010, 1:03 pm ( Reply )

Pants outline is all one colour, this is bad, try using the second darkest shade where the light hits.

The head comes to a point, and at that point there's a fringe? In my opinion the head should not look like that, but Nice try :)

Scarves don't magically stay windswept all the time, make the scarf stay down unless it's either windy or he's running or something.

Eye shape is not too good in my opinion
round it out a bit.

Muzzle point is a mess of shades, clean that up a bit.

On that pose the hand blends with the tail, and that doesn't really look good.

I don't have a problem the T-shirt under the jacket, but the jacket itself looks pretty weird, It apparently has a square corner?

That is all

metaboo, June 21st, 2010, 12:40 pm ( Reply )

yes, I can fix the pants, but what do you mean by it comes to a point? Yes, I know the scarf shouldn't do that, but in order to show that it WAS a skarf, and not a collar, I did that. I kinda like the way the muzzle is a mess of shades, it looks more like fur. Yeah, I think I should fix the hands, and I dont realy see whats weird with the jacket.

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