Comics - Test Comic - BlazeTheHedgehog - May 8th, 2010, 7:47 pm

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BlazeTheHedgehog, May 8th, 2010, 7:47 pm ( Reply )

My first update for showcase.
I'm testing out glowing effects and a new layout for my comics.

This is a scene in my comic, Chaos Masters, that shows a fight with Kim and Cream. I'll make more later but this took a long time. And yes I know I spelled guess wrong in panel 2, but I noticed after I did a lot and didn't feel like fixing it.

Oh and what does C+C mean?

EDIT: I forgot to mention that Cheese is a Fire Chao. That's why the little ball thing on his head is on fire.(or made out of fire)




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Eli the Animal, May 8th, 2010, 7:58 pm ( Reply )

OOOOOOH
MUST READ CHAOS MASTERS! *READS*

Btw great effects


mdg245, May 8th, 2010, 8:00 pm ( Reply )


I like th glowiness. And the new layout. Looks cool and refreshing. :)

And I've been wondering that too...what does c+c mean?

EDIT: Also, Kim's dialogue is kinda hard to read...but that may just be that I'm viewinf from my phone...


Rage, May 8th, 2010, 8:01 pm ( Reply )


C+C = Critiques and Comments


mdg245, May 8th, 2010, 8:02 pm ( Reply )


Oh thanks!


BlazeTheHedgehog, May 8th, 2010, 8:04 pm ( Reply )


Thanks!


Rage, May 8th, 2010, 8:05 pm ( Reply )


No problem XD

The glow is okay, but why not some inside her? After all, she made the glow.

And that charging thing should have been a white ball with a glow too, instead of a sprite.

Also, transparency and strokes on bubbles makes it look proffesional.
Add some more "chi" into your effects, I think.


BlazeTheHedgehog, May 8th, 2010, 8:16 pm ( Reply )


@Rage: The only thing I wanted inside her to glow was the eyes.

I used the sprite because the blast is going to be green.

The bubbles are transparent.

And what do you mean by "chi"?


Rage, May 8th, 2010, 8:50 pm ( Reply )


1-Inside her in general, not just the eyes.
2-Yeah, just do a green ball on whatever program you use and do a glow and add some random effects.
3-Transparent I mean by kind of like this: http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7229/85150912.png
4-Like, some "coolness", it's just a random way of saying it.
Like, adding some blur, some motion, some action, some "chi". =D


ZoneTh, May 8th, 2010, 9:33 pm ( Reply )


@Blaze: Don't forget to send me the Kim sprites, when they're finished.


Bruce the Hedgehound, May 9th, 2010, 12:24 am ( Reply )


Kim is a child murderer.


BlazeTheHedgehog, May 9th, 2010, 12:54 am ( Reply )


Don't worry Cream will live.


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